Vapor

[laceblade]

the mist
drifts low,
blurring the edges
of reality
and perpetuating
the glow
of the streetlights
into the darkness
of night.
slowly, the dew descends,
chilling the face
and wetting the skin.
the wind blows,
driving the biting
moisture,
relentlessly pelting
the face.
i lean in and
i am nothing.

Comments

Whore

[ogre911.livejournal.com]

I'm sorry, but that poem just made me laugh. Thank You jackie.

Re: Whore

[mystickeeper.livejournal.com]

Laugh in a good way, or a bad way? ;_;

[ogre911.livejournal.com]

good

[mystickeeper.livejournal.com]

I need to teach you how to reply to comments on LJ. ;P

[ogre911.livejournal.com]

and how the hell do you reply on lj?

[mystickeeper.livejournal.com]

The same way as you're doing, only...if you're replying to something that somebody said, you need to click the "Reply to this" that's directly under their comment. That way, you start making a thread because your comment will be indented underneath their, and everyone else will know wtf you're talking about.