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[laceblade]

'Kay, well I understand not everyone's down with the feedback thing. But I've edited and finished off everything I have for my story so far. So, I don't think any of you read my story. Whatever. But if you'd like to, you can go here and read it. I'd really like feedback, even if it's just one sentence. Because I am my own beta reader, and I'm the only one who's seen it. Obviously, I've posted unpolished scenes on this LJ. Any comments would be great, but if they're negative, give some explanation so I can grow as a writer (please). That's all, I guess. Now if only I could draw....I know that last drawing was pitiful, but at least I'm trying, :P

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[moony-girl13.livejournal.com]

I've read the first chapter now :) Sorry about not really reading it and commenting right away, I haven't really been going through my Friends list extensively in the last while. Anyway, I quite like your writing style. It's to the point and concise, and the pacing is good; it doesn't lag, it keeps moving. Although I think you could afford to maybe fit in longer, more descriptive passges at points.